Dec 072015
 

I really enjoyed our final class of the semester. I thought it was great hearing about the theorists and seeing the creativity of my classmates. The videos, quizzes, songs, etc. that the class made were really unique and I really enjoyed them.

I also liked the presentations on the tech tools. There are several that I would consider using in the future. I think Microsoft OneNote is a program that I can see myself utilizing for projects. Dragon honestly blew me away. I have used dictation software before but it was never as accurate as what Dragon was when Anthony showed us the program. I think that dictation software can be so useful for my students. I know some of them are intimidated by word processors and similar programs. Others have problems with writing down their thoughts while they can articulate it verbally. This program would be amazing for those students who have these issues. I can totally see myself using the program for my creative writing as well. Anthony said he dictates his writing and that helps him and saves a lot of time. It could prove invaluable for my writing. Too bad it’s so expensive!

 Posted by at 2:38 pm
Dec 072015
 
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Last week’s class was definitely one of my favorites. We had an open conversation about professional matters (post

MFA or PhD). I think these types of conversations are super important to have now, and should be happening more often. We had a discussion about the prospects of nabbing a tenure track position, and our teaching philosophy’s. Having the space to talk openly about our feelings, expectations, and desires is useful to me because I spend a lot of time wrapped up in theory. Sometimes I need an external push or pull to engage with the reality of the work I have signed up to do (and continue to sign up for). I’m sure that somewhere on campus these conversations may be happening more often, but I don’t know where (admittedly I haven’t been the most involved student).

*Also, I learned that I have a lot of support from my classmates if I should walk away from English/Academia and into instant YouTube stardom. Thanks Ya’ll  😉

What do ya’ll think?

How much “professional talk” do you all think we should be having? Are classrooms the appropriate settings for such conversations? If not, when or where should they be happening ( if at all)?

 Posted by at 1:23 pm
Dec 062015
 

We’ve talked a lot this semester about the best way to teach writing, and it seems that in the writing community there is no real consensus. Yet.

Addy brought up a question in an earlier post when she talked about the hideousness of the class who asserted that all HIV-positive people should be forced to wear an identifying mark to warn unsuspecting sex partners of their dangerous status. It was a  ludicrous proposition from so many angles, and one that horrified their teacher. Addy worried in her post that by sharing her opposition to the idea, she might be forcibly changing their opinions, and from a pedagogical standpoint, wasn’t that maybe a bad thing? Like, maybe practicing “banking education”?

Those of you in the Wednesday night class know that I developed a major teacher crush on Paulo Freire this semester. In his final book, which was published just 40 days before his death in 1997, Freire made a proposal, an “ethics of freedom”, that he thought every teacher ought to adopt.

“The fundamental task of educators is to live ethically, to practice ethics daily with young people and children. This is much more important than the subject of biology, if we happen to be biology teachers.”

I work hard to help first year writers improve their essays, but it is more important to me that my students leave me as better people than as better writers.

 Posted by at 8:22 pm
Dec 062015
 

After our first class meeting, a student approached me and told me she was taking ENC 1101 for the 3rd time. She had freckles and round cheeks and the most melt-your-heart brown eyes I’ve ever seen in a student. As we talked, her eyes filled up with tears and she looked at the floor and said, “Never mind,” and abruptly left the classroom.

That evening, I checked out my roster and saw that she wants to be an elementary school teacher. I sent her a quick message.

“You seemed discouraged when you left class this morning, and I hate to think that you are feeling defeated before we even get started. You are not alone. Several of my students are taking ENC 1101 for the second or even third time. It is a challenging class and you should look at that as a good thing if you can. Very few worthwhile things come easily.
By now you should have some idea of which areas of your writing need work/help. When you turn in your writing sample to me, please make a note at the end of what you need help with and I’ll try to think of a way to make it easier to understand. What kind of feedback have your other instructors given you?
I see that your major is Elementary Education. I have been a teacher for a long time, and I have learned that some of the very, very best teachers are the ones who struggled and persevered. You are going to be a wonderful teacher. Hang in there.”
I wanted her to start to take ownership of her learning, but every time she and I spoke, she shot down every suggestion I had with a flat, “That won’t work.” When I asked, “OK, what will work, then?” she’d just say, “I don’t know!” She wouldn’t even try.
By the time essay three was due, she was sending me messages that said, “We both know that I’m not going to have a draft for peer review. So what can I do instead?” When I told her that the peer review process was a required and helpful component of the class, she stopped coming to class on peer review day. Then she stopped turning in her essays altogether. When November 13 approached, I thought for sure that she would drop the class, but she attended right up to the last day.
This afternoon I was sifting through my students’ Final Reflection assignments. This is what she turned in, in its entirety.
Part One
I have learned nothing that I didn’t already know. Everything that was taught in this class
was taught in high school. And the first two times I took this class. Nothing has changed. I still
make the same mistakes I made in high school and because I learned nothing new it’s not going
to change.
Part Two
There are no skills that I learned that I didn’t already know. And the skills I know aren’t
going to be helpful in the future.
Over the course of the semester I communicated with this student privately — via face-to-face conference, email, Starfish, and through the OSD — no fewer than a dozen times. I couldn’t overcome her defeatist attitude. She is the only student who earned an F.
I can say with a clear conscience that I did my very best with this student. I have no misgivings about documenting her non-passing grade. Sometimes it’s OK to throw in the towel.
 Posted by at 5:45 pm
Dec 062015
 

I have been out of the advertising profession for five years now and yet that was where my writing process began and I cannot seem to shake off the habits and methods I learned then. Mind-mapping or the version of what I did was and is still a useful tool in my writing process. I shared the same with my class to great effect. It worked brilliantly as a thesis writing exercise. I had students write down one word that they would use to describe the article and then connecting words which ultimately led to that ‘light-bulb’ moment and the point where they could begin formulating their thesis.

Another exercise that worked to help students recognize tone and formal/informal voice was a letter writing exercise that I did in my high school. I told them the story of “The Lady and the Tiger.” And I asked my students to write a letter to the princess as the lady behind the door, commenting on her decision which is unknown. Students responded very well to this exercise and wanted a similar one so I asked them to write a letter from the princess to the lady behind the door. Both versions threw up funny, intense, and sometimes downright dark results but it showed them the ways in which a point can be tied up or a story finished. They were perceptive about language usage and many, when writing from the perspective of the commoner, used colloquial terms than when they wrote from the princess’s perspective.

 Posted by at 5:24 pm
Dec 062015
 

It is that time of the semester when all I want to do is hibernate for the winter and I find myself staring at a stack of essays. I say stack but what I really mean is files as I grade on the computer. I have Word all set up with auto-text with the necessities like “Incorrect citation format. Check correct format guide in your pocketbook” or my personal favourite “you keep using that word. I don’t think it means what you think it means” and the always used in practically every essay “your is the possessive form of you, you’re is the contraction of you are.” But I also end each essay with an overall statement or two about their writing style and the areas that need improvement.

By the fourth essay, I realized that my students were NOT reading the comments I painstakingly left for them. So I tested a few of my students by commenting that if they came to see me during office hours with a revised version of the paper, I would change their grade. Not one student out of the seven that was the sample size of this study read this. Because nobody came. Or asked me for clarifications.

If we leave the problem of not reading aside, are these comments really helping them? More often than not, I am reiterating what I’ve spoken about in class. I have had students who have improved their writing but I cannot say it is because of the comments I have left on their papers or because they are actually paying attention in class.

And I am facing the same conundrum right now as I grade the final essay. Should I leave comments on them? Will that help? I don’t care. I want to hibernate already. Only if the Florida weather cooperated!

 Posted by at 5:10 pm
Dec 042015
 

As most of you are aware (because I’ve been talking about it half of the semester) one of my classes thought it was a brilliant idea to tattoo people who are HIV positive. This idea came from one of my students in the Epstein essay discussion class. Very quickly, it was picked up by the majority of the class. The driving force behind this thought was that people will ALWAYS lie about their STD status so it is better to have a little plus sign tattooed on their bikini lines so people are aware that they are about to have sex with an HIV positive person.

I experienced a precious few seconds of brain fart. I couldn’t believe what I was hearing. I did manage to speak after a 10-15 second pause where I am pretty sure I resembled a goldfish. I spoke about the history of tattooing a specific section of society (Nazi shitheads) but to no avail. My students were quick to disavow any similarity of their idea to that one.

I faced another hurdle when we read Dan Savage and Urvashi Vaid. The topic of bullying and the same class said that the issues were grossly exaggerated because they had never seen any bullying in their schools.

I turned to the LGBTQA resource centre for help and I had someone come in and talk to my students about stereotypes and the dangers of relying on a single stereotype. She also discussed empathy vs sympathy and used this video. It’s a good video.

But, the big question: where do I separate my ideologies from my students’? We want them to express their opinions but am I not deliberately changing their opinion here? Is it okay? I mean, I know it is okay because they need to know the whole picture about their idea but is it okay from a pedagogical perspective? Am I making sense?

 Posted by at 4:00 pm
Dec 042015
 

I found this really interesting article on Freshmen comp. It breaks down what we do over one semester into twenty tweets. I appreciate the humour of the article greatly but I feel it discounts the effort that is put in; even by us GTAs. The author does realize that towards the end, “Have I just tweeted myself out of a job? I don’t think so. Because although these tweets cover the key lessons of the course, learning how to be a better writer takes more: it takes practice and understanding and repetition. It takes time. And Twitter isn’t about taking one’s time.”

That being said, I think I will be using some of these tweets in my class/syllabus next semester.

Title: First Year Composition in Twenty Tweets

Author: Christine Brandel

Publication: Huff Post College

Date of Publication: 8th December 2010

Click here for the article.

 

 

 Posted by at 2:21 pm
Dec 012015
 

This article was posted by on Facebook by Brian Spears, who noted, “This is why first year writing reads like first year writing.” Encouraging students to vary their word usage seems to be a contentions issue. It is my (admittedly very limited) experience that it is the overuse of these “dead words” that defines freshman writing, not the overuse of a thesaurus. At the level of ENC 1101, I feel that students should be encouraged to experiment with vocabulary, and they should also be taught the pitfalls of randomly selecting synonyms. The two are not exclusive pedagogical aims.

http://www.wsj.com/articles/use-more-expressive-words-teachers-bark-beseech-implore-1448835350

 Posted by at 2:59 pm
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