Dec 082015
 

Insofar as post-process classroom application is concerned, Breuch concludes that its main use rests in “remind[ing] us to think carefully about our teaching practices, and to become more aware of our interactions with students in the classroom,” (122) that, despite pan-subject application, its power rests in understanding that “teaching does not equal mastery of content but rather how teachers and students can interact with one another.” (122) In class we discussed if student-driven essay writing was an effective vehicle to achieve college-level papers, and, if memory serves, consensus was largely skeptical for the same reasons post-process dwindled not long after conception. An issue summed by Matthew Heard: “[A] wholesale adoption of postprocess theory is not realistically possible in most universities since the idealism of the theory clashes at times with the exigencies of student’s needs. (283)” And this is an issue particularly relevant for intro composition courses–can we trust the blank slate to achieve all it needs to arrive at the ‘college-level?’ In terms of potential effectiveness, it’s an encapsulation of the theoretical: “Postprocess…[claims] that the very nature of written communication has been misunderstood until now as a ‘closed’ system that might eventually be captured with enough training, practice, and rules. (Heard 284)” If the system is stagnating and the rules becoming too rigid, the move is understandable as”writing ‘cannot be taught,’ since writing, like speaking cannot be mastered like a skill but must be exercised by ‘entering into specific dialogue. (Heard 284)” If this is granted, then a class based on ‘exercise to greatness’ should be the right move. But in the same way a weight-lifting coach wouldn’t ask a newbie to bench their body weight on the first visit, a teacher shouldn’t toss the first essay to fortune and whim.

 

Dec 082015
 

So, after our discussion about the absence of language, the origin of memory, and the like, I kept mulling over this in my head. It was a fascinating discussion that lead me to unusual places. For example, if we use the example of the man without any memories before language discussed in the Word podcast, then how to we determine what is life? If we view people as truly becoming human at the birth of knowledge and understanding and language represents said birth, then do we qualify babies as living humans before language? I mean sure it breathes and lives; it has biological life. But in essence, babies are piles of flesh that have biological functions. However, they still learn. But, primates can learn how to use tools, but we as a population do not consider them to be human. If it takes language to create the things we associate with humanity, then what are babies before language?

Yes, I’m aware that goes into an odd twist of thought; however, it was spawned from one of my students discussing abortion in one of their essays. Nevertheless, the mind did go there, and I feel like it has created this weird web of thought where I can’t personally check it against other threads in my mind. Racing, so to speak.

 

 

 Posted by at 4:29 pm
Dec 082015
 

After discussing in the class the role of the instructor and coming to the conclusion, albeit much differently than my own initial one, that instructors have the responsibility to be teach ethics so to speak, I found myself re-examining my own beliefs. In a previous post, I said that I found teaching about the issue itself could very well lead to a situation that would require someone affected by the issue at hand or that the students would adhere to my own ideas and beliefs thereby creating worse writing than it already is. I thought that having to discuss these issues would, inevitably, end up like Addy’s class with the tattooing of HIV positive individuals. However, I tried it anyway. Miraculously, they just didn’t care, and so not much happened. While a great relief to my mind, I do find it disconcerting that these issues were barely considered. Would these students be exposed to anything of the sort on their own? Would their views change? After doing some thinking in regards to my teaching philosophy as well, I found that I believe writing should be used as a means of self-discovery and understanding one’s own beliefs. But, that doesn’t seem to mesh with my avoidance of touchy issues, and so, I’ve undergone a change; a change that will force me to alter either my teaching or my belief by the end of the next semester. Only time will tell how it goes.

 Posted by at 4:16 pm
Dec 082015
 

As I reflect back on our many class discussions throughout the course, one conversation in particular comes to mind. Those in the Wednesday night class know this to be the “Stoner Conversation” we held regarding if you can think in the absence of language. As I was babysitting my 2 and a half year old, and 8 month old nephews over the weekend, this conversation came to mind. I can see my 2 and a half month old acting as a sponge, every word he learns he finds some way to use it, even though he does not know what it means. However, you can see he is absolutely thinking about it.

I found some information from professor Peter Carruthers at the University of Maryland that sheds some light on this in a different way than what we had discussed in class:

“There is a spectrum of opinions on the role of language in cognition. At one extreme, philosophers like Michael Dummett have argued that thought is impossible in the absence of language; and social scientists influenced by Benjamin Whorf have believed that the natural languages that people grow up speaking will have a profound influence on the character of their thoughts. At the other extreme, philosophers like Jerry Fodor, together with most cognitive scientists, have believed that language is but an input/output device for cognition, playing no significant role in thought itself. Peter Carruthers has steered a path in between these two extremes. In his 1996 book,[1] he allowed that much thought can and does occur in the absence of language, while arguing for a constitutive role for language in conscious thinking, conducted in “inner speech“. In his 2006 book,[2] this position is broadened and deepened. Following Antonio Damasio, he argues that mental rehearsals of action issue in imagery that plays a profound role in human practical reasoning, with inner speech now being seen as a subset of action rehearsal. Carruthers now argues that the serial use of these rehearsals can issue in a whole new level of thinking and reasoning, serving to realize the “dual systems” that psychologists like Daniel Kahneman believe to be involved in human reasoning processes.”

Looking at my nephews, I am aware that in one case, he has no language, while in the the other case his language is limited. But, I can see that they know images, and in some sense this type of action rehearsal that Carruthers describes, meaning the two and a half year old knows how to do certain things, or perform certain acts in the absence of language. There is thought there, just no language.  I would be interested if anybody else had opinions regarding their own experiences with children in this sense.

 

Dec 082015
 

For my tech tool, I chose to examine the Hemingway Editor App, and this program values concise and simple writing. This program is certainly a product of the ideological landscape that currently surrounds writing. Previously, any type of writing was viewed as an art form, and it was valued for its complexity. This concept conjoins with the art of handwriting as well, which required the writer to take their time.  While these aspects are still valued in some regards, mostly everything is typed now and the amount of information as well as the pace in which we, the audience, receive this information is rapidly increasing. Most of society no longer has the time to read a two page email or letter describing something that can be said in a couple of sentences. And why would we want to? That type of writing is left for the creative writers and the readers of novels. Society now functions at a fast-paced stamina, and if what you are reading does not convey the point quickly, it is left behind.

This got me thinking about my students and how they value reading and writing currently. Unless it is for class, the majority of their reading consists of 140 character twitter posts or random hashtag collections under Instagram photos. Since they don’t use Facebook anymore, they don’t even run the risk of reading a lengthy political or sociological rant from a friend or relative that I know I am at least accustomed to. This generation lives their lives through pictures now. They create these photo landscapes of their lives , capturing every selfie and memory they possibly can. Hand written diaries have been replaced with Instagram accounts, and conversations have been replaced with SnapChat. It will be interesting to see how progress in the field of digital humanities will be shaped by this and how it will shape our students.

 

Dec 072015
 

I really enjoyed our final class of the semester. I thought it was great hearing about the theorists and seeing the creativity of my classmates. The videos, quizzes, songs, etc. that the class made were really unique and I really enjoyed them.

I also liked the presentations on the tech tools. There are several that I would consider using in the future. I think Microsoft OneNote is a program that I can see myself utilizing for projects. Dragon honestly blew me away. I have used dictation software before but it was never as accurate as what Dragon was when Anthony showed us the program. I think that dictation software can be so useful for my students. I know some of them are intimidated by word processors and similar programs. Others have problems with writing down their thoughts while they can articulate it verbally. This program would be amazing for those students who have these issues. I can totally see myself using the program for my creative writing as well. Anthony said he dictates his writing and that helps him and saves a lot of time. It could prove invaluable for my writing. Too bad it’s so expensive!

 Posted by at 2:38 pm
Dec 072015
 
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Last week’s class was definitely one of my favorites. We had an open conversation about professional matters (post

MFA or PhD). I think these types of conversations are super important to have now, and should be happening more often. We had a discussion about the prospects of nabbing a tenure track position, and our teaching philosophy’s. Having the space to talk openly about our feelings, expectations, and desires is useful to me because I spend a lot of time wrapped up in theory. Sometimes I need an external push or pull to engage with the reality of the work I have signed up to do (and continue to sign up for). I’m sure that somewhere on campus these conversations may be happening more often, but I don’t know where (admittedly I haven’t been the most involved student).

*Also, I learned that I have a lot of support from my classmates if I should walk away from English/Academia and into instant YouTube stardom. Thanks Ya’ll  😉

What do ya’ll think?

How much “professional talk” do you all think we should be having? Are classrooms the appropriate settings for such conversations? If not, when or where should they be happening ( if at all)?

 Posted by at 1:23 pm
Dec 062015
 

We’ve talked a lot this semester about the best way to teach writing, and it seems that in the writing community there is no real consensus. Yet.

Addy brought up a question in an earlier post when she talked about the hideousness of the class who asserted that all HIV-positive people should be forced to wear an identifying mark to warn unsuspecting sex partners of their dangerous status. It was a  ludicrous proposition from so many angles, and one that horrified their teacher. Addy worried in her post that by sharing her opposition to the idea, she might be forcibly changing their opinions, and from a pedagogical standpoint, wasn’t that maybe a bad thing? Like, maybe practicing “banking education”?

Those of you in the Wednesday night class know that I developed a major teacher crush on Paulo Freire this semester. In his final book, which was published just 40 days before his death in 1997, Freire made a proposal, an “ethics of freedom”, that he thought every teacher ought to adopt.

“The fundamental task of educators is to live ethically, to practice ethics daily with young people and children. This is much more important than the subject of biology, if we happen to be biology teachers.”

I work hard to help first year writers improve their essays, but it is more important to me that my students leave me as better people than as better writers.

 Posted by at 8:22 pm
Dec 062015
 

It is that time of the semester when all I want to do is hibernate for the winter and I find myself staring at a stack of essays. I say stack but what I really mean is files as I grade on the computer. I have Word all set up with auto-text with the necessities like “Incorrect citation format. Check correct format guide in your pocketbook” or my personal favourite “you keep using that word. I don’t think it means what you think it means” and the always used in practically every essay “your is the possessive form of you, you’re is the contraction of you are.” But I also end each essay with an overall statement or two about their writing style and the areas that need improvement.

By the fourth essay, I realized that my students were NOT reading the comments I painstakingly left for them. So I tested a few of my students by commenting that if they came to see me during office hours with a revised version of the paper, I would change their grade. Not one student out of the seven that was the sample size of this study read this. Because nobody came. Or asked me for clarifications.

If we leave the problem of not reading aside, are these comments really helping them? More often than not, I am reiterating what I’ve spoken about in class. I have had students who have improved their writing but I cannot say it is because of the comments I have left on their papers or because they are actually paying attention in class.

And I am facing the same conundrum right now as I grade the final essay. Should I leave comments on them? Will that help? I don’t care. I want to hibernate already. Only if the Florida weather cooperated!

 Posted by at 5:10 pm
Nov 232015
 

Despite the grumbling and the fact that a 7-10PM class made for ridiculously long Wednesdays, I learned some ish, as one of my favorite 1101ers would say.

This post is to assure the dubious among you that ENC 6700 wasn’t a waste of your time. You will probably use the things you learned (assuming you were paying attention) more than you use your middle school Algebra since a fair percentage of us will inexplicably wind up spending many of our professional years at the front of classrooms. It’s what we word-loving people do when we’re not making things with words.

I spent 6 years teaching high school Language Arts with zero prior formal education in praxis/heuristics, etc. I had no idea that there were “theory camps” or that writer nerds have heated arguments about how we write and why we write. I had a few “Ooooooohhhh, THAT’S why teachers do that” moments this semester. And while the assignment that requires us to write our teaching philosophy might hurt our heads and feel like word manure, it is a valuable exercise in introspection and in the Greek maxim to “know thyself”.

Finally, to help you fill all the hours you won’t spend reading student essays during the break, a book suggestion from Pulitzer Prize winner Rick Bragg.

All Over But the Shoutin’

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