Nov 202015
 

Wednesday’s presentations were so cool.

The creative theory camp stuff was awesome in itself, but I was surprised by how much I dug the tech tools. I’m think I’m what you’d call a “Late Adopter” who needs to be more or less forced into trying new technology (examples: still using a paper planner/agenda for everything in my life, still having an iPhone 4–which I was forced to get because the flip phones required Pay-as-You-Go, etc.), but after our class I’m out to try several of those. I’d tried Evernote before and written it off, but realized on Weds. how clutch it is for getting all my recipes in one place (something I’ve NEVER been able to figure out, since so many are online.) The only thing that scares me about all this tech is accessibility of my info–isn’t all of this totally browsable and analyze-able by these people? Is that bad? I have this deep, perpetual fear of putting too much stuff on the Internet, so that’s partly why I haven’t used a lot of this stuff. Probably unrealistic? Curious how other people feel about this.

Another thing I kept mulling over was the whole DragonDictate concept in relation to rhetoric and writing. It was a weird revelation to find that I bet I would write SO differently if I was talking out loud. My written self is so much more thought-out and personal in many ways… I often feel like I’m stuck at surface-level stuff when I talk out loud, and I wonder if that would translate to my writing if I used Dragon. Probably going to test that out. Also, I’m way funnier in writing (seriously, I confirmed this with several close friends.) The little humor skill I possess would probably go down the tubes if I was orating my jokes. Goodbye witty and social emails.

Also, what happens if you laugh when you’re using Dragon? Does it write LOL or hahaha or ROFLcopter? Thousands of people would be exposed for fake laughing if you could only write “haha”s when you were truly “haha”ing.

Thanks for the sweet prezzos, guys!

Nov 132015
 

When I first approached the idea of post-process pedagogy, after reading through the Breuch and Heard essays, I was in the camp of why do we need a name for this and isn’t this just all the best parts of expressivist and epistemic theory without the potential limitations of the social sphere?  Then I began to think about the potential of what it could mean to be an instructor who teaches first year writing for a college composition program that subscribes to the tenants of post-process pedagogy, and I got goosebumps.

What if, I asked myself, I stopped trying to get my students to understand why it’s important for their arguments to adhere to a standard, to come from a certain place?  So I thought, if I am to teach writing without process, I would have to eliminate process from the very start.  I would have to forgo the writing prompt.  What chaos might ensue without the boundaries of the writing prompt!  No, I thought, I could never do it.  That’s just too much freedom.  No student can learn in such liberal environs.  Then it hit me.  I never had a writing prompt in FYC.

Neither of my first year composition courses (same professor) were taught with writing prompts.  In fact, the only thing I learned about the vison and revision process of writing, was that most people do it.  I am the result of a post-process pedagogy.  And I absolutely loved my writing classes, partly because I felt like what I was doing was normal, natural, not new or alien.  I wasn’t asked to conform.  I was asked to communicate.  The classroom, at that point, became simply a space for me to do what I felt I needed to do in order to convey and support my ideas about the world.  I have to admit, looking back on my work from those courses, I wasn’t an impressive writer.  I was barely passable by my own FYC standards.  But I’m still writing.  Maybe that’s enough to convince me about the merits of post-process.

Nov 092015
 

After class last week on Post-Process theory, I have to admit I am still completely lost as to what Post-Process really means, or what it would look like in the classroom. In my opinion, it seems like a terrible idea for composition scholars to propose a theory that effectively eliminates the need for their careers. But hey, what do I know? Perhaps, if someone provided a literal and descriptive explanation of what post-process pedagogy would look like in the classroom, it could gain more ground. Matthew Heard emphasizes the need for experimentation with post-process pedagogies, and I would agree…so why doesn’t he take the lead?

Beyond my initial complaints of the lack of uniformity and practical application of this theory, it seems that there is an overall concern or emphasis on dialogue as the primary process of writing. Breuch brought up Irene Ward, who emphasize the functionality of dialogue between different mediums, including the teacher, the self, the classmates, and the audience of the paper. In addition, Heard claims that post-process involves a turn toward the social and cites Kent’s claims that writing is public, interpretive, and situated within a context. I see some of these ideas showing up within the writing program and course offerings here at FAU. In particular, there is an emphasis towards social contexts, readings that can be discussed in class, group communication and group activities, and the philosophy that writing can only be learned through writing. In addition, there have been classes offered in the past (that I have heard about) and some potential upcoming classes that involve writing for the community and writing within social contexts. These seem like indications of the ideas of post-process, which is interesting because it suggests that there may in fact be a potential for pedagogical application.

Nov 092015
 

Now that I am looking ahead towards next semester and teaching ENC 1102, I am thinking critically about how I will use commenting. After this class and having graded several rounds of papers, I have realized that only providing extensive feedback on final drafts does not help students. By the time they get their grades and my comments back for an essay, they are well on their way to considering the next essay, and they don’t care about the small comments I made on the previous. As was discussed in this class period and Nancy Sommers writes about, the goal of commenting on papers is to motivate students to revise. I think there is a disconnect when the comments are on a finished assignment. However, the issue remains that students will rely too heavily on a teachers feedback and ignore peer review.

Out of all of this rambling of ideas, I am trying to create a plan for the upcoming semester in order to experiment with a new way of grading and commenting. I think I will still give extensive comments on the rough and final drafts of the first essay. For the second and third essays, I think I will give one significant comment on the rough draft that gives them a direction, but rely more heavily on peer review. The final project I want to use in ENC 1102 next semester involves an annotated bibliography as the fourth “essay” and then a larger research paper for the fifth based on what they found in the annotated bib. For this sequence, I will hold conferences and give individualized feedback on their project and the most important ways their writing can improve. I will also have them turn in a proposal for this project where I will provide comments and feedback.

After the readings and discussion from this class, I am also considering the effectiveness and dangers of grading papers anonymously. I would be interested to know if anyone has done this before, and what the results would be. I am afraid that at times I am biased towards my students. Not because I prefer some over others, but because when a student continuously writes C papers shows an improvement, I give him a C+ even though the level of writing would not have been worth a C+ compared to other student papers. I can’t decide if this is a good thing or a dangerous trap.

Nov 062015
 

Dobrin’s ideas cast the separation of writing and composition in a beneficial light; he speaks of writing as something that goes somehow further then composition ever could. Yet at the same time, he seems to be arguing that composition should remain synonymous with writing, should take on a definition greater than itself in order to start to mean something more than it already does: that is, to be closer to “writing”. One way I can see a benefit in separating writing from composition lies in the potential usefulness of repurposing of those words. When I speak to my students in class, I do not tell them we are “composing.” I tell them we are writing. They think they are writing. They are writing. Composition is, in many ways, an antiquated term that needs rejuvenation in order to be pertinent again. To the students, the real stakeholders in this discussion, composition is not what they are attempting to do. They are attempting to get enough words out on paper to complete an assigned task. For most of them, this is writing; and who is to say that they are wrong? I might go further for some of them, and say that a few are attempting to write so that their ideas will be deemed convincing, or even “worthy”. Are they composing an argument, though? Not in their own minds. Creating one, perhaps. Writing one? Certainly—at least as far as they are concerned.

That is not to say that composition should not have its place as a term. If we could find a way to use composition in ways that go beyond the conventional, that certainly go beyond freshman classes, it would go a long way to redefining the word in student’s minds. However, in terms of drawbacks, it is perhaps easy to see this redefining of a word as unnecessary muddying. Why not leave composition and writing as interchangeable concepts? I don’t believe they truly are interchangeable though, and haven’t been for awhile. Practically speaking, they don’t have the same meaning to the students that they do to the teachers. How very post-process. As was pointed out in class, the term “composition” rarely survives as a label beyond freshman-level courses. Is it only in our beginning stages of learning that we are “composing”? Are we no longer composing once we take on a thesis, or tackle a major academic project? When does composing become less relevant as a metaphor for our writing experience and (dare I say it) process?

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Nov 032015
 

I have a few memories of my mom as a child, not because she is dead or ran away when I was young, but because I have a terrible memory. One, she used to read to me every night until I was able to do so myself, and two, she used to tell me time and time again when a “dirty word” would slip out of my mouth that “people curse out of ignorance.” Although I have seen a lot of cursing amongst the educated grad students and teachers alike, it has become something that I think holds some weight.
Do we engage in a richer experience through complex vocabulary? Or is that we just have a more clear and expressive way to describe our experience? It seems that now as an adult (to be debated), I use curses when I want to be emphatic or humorous or highlight an emotion. My mind does not bring me first to a curse because I am unable to think or find another word that would better describe what thoughts I am trying to solidify with words. As an avid reader and writer, I live a life that is quite dramatic in my own head, turning average events and mundane memories into fantastical story arcs. I don’t know that a richer vocabulary enhances our experience, but I would say that it enhances the way we are able to express ourselves.

Nov 022015
 

John Bean conceives the purpose of writing as a process of discovery. When sitting down to write, thoughts are jumbled and sloppy, like trying to keep in between two
palms a handful of water; everything we wanted to say, or thought we had to say, slips between the cracks, and when we do actually hammer out some of the original ideas we were
able to maintain they only seem like a pale shadow to what was originally in our heads.

A student often fails to see their ideas as holding any weight of importance, they see themselves as responding to an assignment, an assignment that is little more than a
pain in the ass. This is what often causes for a carelessness in recording, editing, and most importantly discovering. The structure of the program that the GTA’s are forced to
follow is asking us to train our students how to write lengthy drivel bombs. Somehow, someway, it is our job in between the mountain of grading to create assignments, stimulate
discussion that will help our students to think. Over the course of the semester my students have went from “my students” to “my kids.” I care more for them now, and I want
them to succeed, not in my class but beyond. So it becomes important for me to plant the right seeds, and relate to them in the right ways, so when they leave my class they will
be somewhat equipped for the professors out there who are old and out of touch, and they will be ready to bullshit their way through, just as I have. Hopefully.

Oct 242015
 

In last night’s class, we discussed how some languages have words that can more fully express what we mean.  Dr. Mason was searching for a word that meant homesickness for a home that never existed. I remembered seeing this word on Word Porn’s facebook page. It took me some time, but I tracked down the word: Hiraeth.

Hiraeth. (n). A homesickness for a home to which you cannot return, a home which maybe never was; the nostalgia, the yearning, the grief, for the lost places of your past.

Great word, right?

I thought I’d provide a link to other words available in other languages that we do not have in English: http://www.highexistence.com/theres-a-word-for-that-25-expressions-you-should-have-in-your-vocabulary/

There are other lists like this out there, of course. But this was the one I found Hiraeth on. Some of my favorites include: mamihlapinatapai, fernweh, and nefelibata.

Oct 142015
 

When we read Donald Murray’s reflection on the writing conference, I thought, “Wow. Wouldn’t it be great to have the autonomy to teach that way?”

Turns out, yes, it would — in theory, and with a lot of practice.

My student conferences were largely successful. I channeled my inner psychotherapist, bit my tongue, and tried to be “The Listening Eye”.  I enjoyed talking to my students, and was gratified to see how seriously they were taking the class. It was fascinating to see the myriad and personal approaches they had to reading, drafting, and writing. Some of them were very, very self-aware of their limitations and strengths, and all of them were able to articulate a plan to achieve the “grade goal” they set for themselves.

It was exhausting. I don’t know how by 1979 Murray had managed 30,000+ student conferences — and 35 on the day about which he wrote.

 

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